Lesson 142HSK 6

解说词 Jiěshuōcí — The Narration

第三年 · Third Year

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Alex
我写好了片头的解说词,你听听:“晴川里建于一九二九年,历经战乱、拥挤与变迁,迄今已近百年。”一共三句,都是书面语,措辞我改了好几遍。你觉得会不会太文绉绉了?
Wǒ xiě hǎo le piàntóu de jiěshuōcí, nǐ tīngting: “Qíngchuān Lǐ jiàn yú yī jiǔ èr jiǔ nián, lìjīng zhànluàn, yōngjǐ yǔ biànqiān, qìjīn yǐ jìn bǎi nián.” Yígòng sān jù, dōu shì shūmiànyǔ, cuòcí wǒ gǎi le hǎo jǐ biàn. Nǐ juéde huì bu huì tài wénzhōuzhōu le?
I've written the narration for the opening — listen: "Qingchuan Lane was built in 1929. Through war, crowding and change, it has stood for nearly a hundred years." Three sentences in all, all in written style; I reworked the wording several times. Do you think it's too bookish?
苏小雨
写得很好,可是读起来像博物馆的说明牌。我们说好只加一句旁白,你怎么写了三句?观众会以为我们在上历史课。
Xiě de hěn hǎo, kěshì dú qilai xiàng bówùguǎn de shuōmíngpái. Wǒmen shuōhǎo zhǐ jiā yí jù pángbái, nǐ zěnme xiě le sān jù? Guānzhòng huì yǐwéi wǒmen zài shàng lìshǐ kè.
It's well written, but it reads like a museum label. We agreed on just one line of voice-over — how did you end up with three? The audience will think we're giving a history lesson.