Lesson 141HSK 6

剪辑 Jiǎnjí — The Edit

第三年 · Third Year

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苏小雨
粗剪出来了，一共三个小时，可是正式的片子长度最多九十分钟。我看了三遍，每一段都舍不得删减，越看越不知道该怎么取舍。你说我们先从哪儿下手？
Cūjiǎn chūlai le, yígòng sān ge xiǎoshí, kěshì zhèngshì de piānzi chángdù zuì duō jiǔshí fēnzhōng. Wǒ kàn le sān biàn, měi yí duàn dōu shěbude shānjiǎn, yuè kàn yuè bù zhīdao gāi zěnme qǔshě. Nǐ shuō wǒmen xiān cóng nǎr xiàshǒu?
The rough cut's done — three hours in all, but the final film can be ninety minutes at most. I've watched it three times and can't bear to cut any part; the more I watch, the less I know what to keep and what to drop. Where do you think we start?
Alex
首先，大的结构不能动，还是按季节分成四个段落：秋天、冬天、春天、夏天。其次，每一段只留一个主角，别的人做配角，段落之间要衔接自然。这样观众才不会觉得乱。
Shǒuxiān, dà de jiégòu bù néng dòng, háishi àn jìjié fēnchéng sì ge duànluò: qiūtiān, dōngtiān, chūntiān, xiàtiān. Qícì, měi yí duàn zhǐ liú yí ge zhǔjué, biéde rén zuò pèijué, duànluò zhījiān yào xiánjiē zìrán. Zhèyàng guānzhòng cái bú huì juéde luàn.
First, the overall structure stays as it is: four sections by season — fall, winter, spring, summer. Second, each section keeps one main character and the others play supporting roles, with natural transitions between sections. That way the audience won't get confused.