Lesson 107HSK 6

选题 Xuǎntí — Choosing the Subject

第三年 · Third Year

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苏小雨
申请表上第一个问题就把我难住了:“请用一句话概括你的选题。”我写了三遍,每一遍都太长。你帮我看看,问题到底出在哪里?
Shēnqǐngbiǎo shang dì-yī ge wèntí jiù bǎ wǒ nánzhù le: “Qǐng yòng yí jù huà gàikuò nǐ de xuǎntí.” Wǒ xiě le sān biàn, měi yí biàn dōu tài cháng. Nǐ bāng wǒ kànkan, wèntí dàodǐ chū zài nǎli?
The very first question on the application form has me stuck: "Summarize your subject in one sentence." I've written it three times and every time it's too long. Have a look — where's the problem?
Alex
你写的是“一条老弄堂的消失和一代人的记忆”。意思固然没错,但太大了,谁都可以这么写。评委每天看几百份申请,凭什么记住你这一份?
Nǐ xiě de shì “yì tiáo lǎo lòngtáng de xiāoshī hé yí dài rén de jìyì”. Yìsi gùrán méi cuò, dàn tài dà le, shéi dōu kěyǐ zhème xiě. Píngwěi měitiān kàn jǐ bǎi fèn shēnqǐng, píng shénme jìzhù nǐ zhè yí fèn?
You wrote "the disappearance of an old lane and the memory of a generation." The meaning is fine, of course, but it's too big — anyone could write that. The judges read hundreds of applications a day; why would they remember yours?